24th September 2015
Dear Mrs Parkes
Thank you for helping us to improve our writing. I liked all your suggestions that you gave to our teacher.
I really enjoyed you teaching us attributes because I didn't understand the meaning of it until you explained what they were. Now attributes are my strength because I understand what it is. I also enjoyed writing the 4x4 poem. I was really excited because the 4x4 poem was about myself and it was really awesome describing myself.
Sometimes, I don’t edit my work but I know different types of sentences like complex, compound and simple. I will practice and practice editing my work so my writing is more interesting. Also, during the past term, my teacher has taught me how to edit my work but I really need more practice to find my mistakes and fix them up.
I appreciate all the help you have gave me.
Next I will rereading my work to practice editing.
Yours sincerely
Benjamin.
