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Friday 15 April 2016

Descriptive Writing of a ice cream sandwhich

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Walht: write a descriptive paragraph
Scrumptious bites one after another with cracking surface breaking apart in my mouth. Sinking my teeth into the creamy center melting on my tongue mixing together with the hard surface trying to bite my hardest but it was hard as a rock.



2 comments:

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Kia Ora Benjamin
I like how you compared the ice cream sandwich to be as hard as a rock. Unfortunately I didn't get a taste of one because I didn't turn up on the day it was ready. In the picture the ice cream sandwich looks delicious to eat I just wished I came to school that day. Would you make another Ice cream sandwich?

Unknown said...

Kia Ora Benjamin
I like how you compared the ice cream sandwich to be as hard as a rock. Unfortunately I didn't get a taste of one because I didn't turn up on the day it was ready. In the picture the ice cream sandwich looks delicious to eat I just wished I came to school that day. Would you make another Ice cream sandwich?

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