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Friday 28 August 2015

The Black Piranha

The Black Piranha

WALT: write a descriptive paragraph

A mysterious creature is what my dad and I was searching for in the water. Me and my dad went snorkeling under water through the water jungle. As my dad told me there were Black Piranhas in the water jungle that were very viscous.


The Black Piranha is a deadly predator in the water jungle.The Black Piranha was a average size like a flounder. The Black Piranha had burning red eyes looking straight at the me, and having superb striking teeth. The Piranha looks very distinctive, And also a great incredible stocky body like rottweiler and very minmove lble like a shark. A tooth of a Black Piranha is the sharpest teeth in the world.

As the great Piranha swarm away I knew that we had no chance of catching the Black Piranha. But at least my dad and I had fun we will still come back



1 comments:

Unknown said...

Kia Ora Benjamin
I really love your story. I created a story as well. The black piranha is really interesting. Was is easy writing a story about a black piranha?

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