WALHT: write a enjoyable and interesting narrative.
One sunny day This boy named Cage was warming up for his pre free run around the whole town. Cage is only a teenager dropping out school for a job. Cage was the bestest free runner on the street , there was some good free runners but he was better. Cage was pretty tall guy but sold, he really had big hands so he can grip on those slippery brick walls. Cage always practiced on the streets with his friends after work and before work he was never in the house during his spare time because all he could 24/7 was free run. Cage always wished to be a ginormous giant so he can go over the town like nothing.
As Cage took his run it started to rain really heavy, but Cage didn’t care he still jumped over and climbed buildings like a monkey in a jungle. He was coming to a brick wall that was quite more slippery than the others but he didn’t see what was coming and all of a sudden a bird flew at his face and Cage hit his elbow on top of the brick wall and fell 4 stories down. As he was falling thinking that this will be his last thought but he saw this humongous colourful puddle that what he was heading to so he tilted his body so he can land on his back. When he landed he couldn’t believe that he broke his fall. But what he didn’t noticed that some of the colourful water went into his mouth and he called feel this this funny feeling down his spine, as he looked at his feet and hands and it was getting bigger and bigger he was turning into a giant his wish has finally come true.
When Cage was running and jumping over buildings like hurdles, he was having lots of fun but not for long because police and soldiers started to shoot at him then he looked back and saw all the reckless damage he did to the buildings but luckily no one got hurt. Cage thought he was innocence for what he done but he was terrified that they didn’t believe he did it on a accident. So he ran to the tallest building in the town and hid behind it, all of a sudden he saw a suspicious man on the ground signalling to Cage so he went as low as a lion and spoke to him.
The man’s name was Jake. jake used to be a scientist but got fired, he said to Cage four hundred years ago the incident happened but back then jake was only a teenager studying about to be a scientist. Jake created a special potion to cure but all he needed was last drip of ingredients and that was the great leaf but the hard thing was that it was on top of st everest mountain. As Cage was frightened from the story he knew that he had to get it no matter what. So he ran for his life, there was no going back. As he was running he started fading and he started getting heavier he thought he had no chance but he tried his best and crawled for his life, Jake was on his shoulder cheering him on. When he got to the mountain he started to feel weak so he used his free running strength and he free ran up the hill. When Cage got to the great leaf he pulled it out like socks and gave to jake to put with the cure, it's not long when Cage will die. Cage had to drink the potion and not for long he started to shrink to his normal form.
Now he knows to be careful what he wishes for.
1 comments:
Kia Ora Ben
I like your story of the giant. When I was writing my story it was kind of hard to think of what to write. While you were writing your story was it hard to think of ideas?.
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